For HS, you should go with at minimum Clover v4297.
DSDT has nothing to do with CPU, but you're not even using the DSDT/SSDT I had in my bootpack.
I see only SSDT-PNLF.aml in /EFI/Clover/ACPI/Patched for Brightness slider.
You have NVMe patches in your Config where it's not needed on HS.
No, mSATA SSD won't fit in the WWAN slot. You'll need to replace with an M.2 2280 drive, not NVMe if that's what you're going for, into the same slot, there's no room for secondary disk.